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Cameron Mentor

Cameron

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Learning to put a period at the end of a sentence is a fairly basic English skill...

Come on, man. Why don't you help him out with what's wrong rather than crucify him?

I appreciate your enthusiasm to bring things to a better standard in X-Plane, Peter. Nice website design!

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Peter T. Newbie

Peter T.

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Come on, man. Why don't you help him out with what's wrong rather than crucify him?

I appreciate your enthusiasm to bring things to a better standard in X-Plane, Peter. Nice website design!

Thank you Cameron! :)

@Kaphias-thanks for the input, i corrected a few mistakes :)

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i<3xplane10 Newbie

i<3xplane10

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I like the website, however when I saw the download button for the 787 I clicked that button as fast as I could. Then i realized its not for download. You might want to fix that. That aside, you made a really nice website. :)

Kaphias Newbie

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Come on, man. Why don't you help him out with what's wrong rather than crucify him?

Just following the example set by a few seemingly respected members of this community. If things are changing, that's wonderful and I'm very much looking forward to it.

@Kaphias-thanks for the input, i corrected a few mistakes :)

On the 787 page:

Un-capitialize "Resolutionary"

Capitalize the p in "X-plane"

Try "The 787 is also equipped with"

Un-capitalize "Pushback"

Capitalize "over"

Don't put the download thing in all caps

Capitalize "the 787"

Capitalize "there"

On the 767 page:

Capitalize "boeing"

No period after sounds

On the About Us page:

Remove any reference to the past, shutting down, etc. If you don't want people to hound you for it than you need to forget about it. Out of sight, maybe out of mind one day.

Change to "two new people"

Un-capitalize "While"

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Cameron Mentor

Cameron

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Just following the example set by a few seemingly respected members of this community. If things are changing, that's wonderful and I'm very much looking forward to it.

This statement is immature on many levels, Matthew. I'm quite certain you are capable of being better than this.

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Ryan M. Newbie

Ryan M.

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Just following the example set by a few seemingly respected members of this community. If things are changing, that's wonderful and I'm very much looking forward to it.

On the 787 page:

Un-capitialize "Resolutionary"

Capitalize the p in "X-plane"

Try "The 787 is also equipped with"

Un-capitalize "Pushback"

Capitalize "over"

Don't put the download thing in all caps

Capitalize "the 787"

Capitalize "there"

On the 767 page:

Capitalize "boeing"

No period after sounds

On the About Us page:

Remove any reference to the past, shutting down, etc. If you don't want people to hound you for it than you need to forget about it. Out of sight, maybe out of mind one day.

Change to "two new people"

Un-capitalize "While"

You say to capitalize the P in X-Plane, than you go and do the exact same error he did. :huh:

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Dozer Newbie

Dozer

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I miss chemistry. It was a subject I enjoyed. With hindsight. At the time, trying to memorise pages upon pages of reaction mechanisms was very tedious. What happens when you heat an alkane under reflux in the presence of weak sulphuric acid? Haven't a clue. Electron orbits and van der Waal's forces, those were the good bits.

On the subject of the website, could you use higher-resolution images of the aircraft? They're a bit blurry (on my browser through my rural internet connection).

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